“But it isn’t only candy bars he makes. Oh, dear me, no! He has some really fantastic inventions up his sleeve, Mr. Willy Wonka has!”
Paraphrases Can Contain Some of the Author’s Words
Successful paraphrases restate the author’s idea in completely different words. However, some specific types of words and phrases do not need to be changed or quoted:
- Proper nouns, like the names of people or places
- Technical and specific terms, or language that cannot be rephrased (there’s only one way to say “acid rain” or “rocking chair”)
- Small joining words, like “and” or “to” and the articles “a” and “the”
Here's an example:
Original Quote
Plagiarism
Grandpa Joe explains to Charlie that Willy Wonka has a few really amazing inventions up his sleeve (Dahl 9).
Paraphrase
Grandpa Joe explains to Charlie that Willy Wonka is not simply a great chocolate maker, but also a skilled inventor (Dahl 9).
Tip
When you repeat proper nouns or technical terms, you should still avoid using more than 2–3 of the author’s words in a row.